Thesis Sentences

Read these examples of good thesis sentences:

1. People who live in the suburbs are alike. (undivided) This is not a good thesis. Divide into sub-topics as below.

People who live in the suburbs are alike in age, race, and politics. (divided)

2. It makes sense to attend a community college, since the quality of instruction is high and the cost is low.

3. Christmas is an exhausting experience due to the extra energy and tension it inspires.

4. The bore, the brag, the flirt -- these people typify most cocktail parties.

5. To love, honor, and obey -- these vows may be altered by circumstances.

6. Mr. X is short, fat, and outging, whereas Mr. Y is tall, slim, and shy.

Rewrite the following thesis sentences so they contain proof, evidence, or reasoning to support the position, belief, or point of view expressed.

1. It makes sense to drive a compact car.

2. A career in nursing offers rewarding opportunities.

3. A good marriage depends upon three important qualities in a couple.

4. Men as well as women suffer from sexual stereotypes.

5. Four years of high school were (not) of great value to me.

6. The Bible is a great book to study.

7. It is a good thing to travel.

8. It makes sense to cook and eat at home.

9. A good vacation has three ingredients.

10. Tennis (football, basketball, etc.) is a challenging sport.