Heading
_____Is Heading Correct?
(Upper left corner of p. 1: Example:)
Jane Doe
Professor Andrade
English 2332
25 Feb. 2005
Introduction
____Title appropriate to the subject of the essay?: See T in
Grading
____Correct type of title: See T in Grading
____Introductory quotation? See student examples:
____Adequate transitional sentence linking introductory quotation to the
introduction? See examples
____Author's name and the stories'/poems' names mentioned in the
introduction?
____Thesis is analytical and does not merely state events in the story. (See
explanation of thesis in
Grading: XThesis) OR
First Body Paragraph
____Topic sentence develops, supports the idea of the thesis? See XThesis in
Grading
____Quotations that support the argument of the topic sentence?
____Quotations appropriately punctuated and with page numbers in ( )? See QM in
Grading
____Quotations have adequate transition: see TR in Grading
____Writer analyzes thesis and does not rely on plot summary
Second Body Paragraph
____ Topic sentence develops, supports the argument of the thesis?
____Quotations that support the argument of the topic sentence?
____Quotations appropriately punctuated and with page numbers in ( )?
____Quotations have adequate transition: see TR in Grading
____Writer analyzes thesis and does not rely on plot summary
Third Body Paragraph:
____ Topic sentence develops, supports the argument of the thesis?
____Quotations that support the argument of the topic sentence?
____Quotations appropriately punctuated and with page numbers in ( )?
____Quotations have adequate transition: see TR in Grading
____Writer analyzes thesis and does not rely on plot summary
Conclusion
____Conclusion connects the stories to contemporary life or the student writer's
own life
____Conclusion provides emotional closure
Grammar
_____Good grammar
_____Needs minor improvement: Grammar skills: see Help on the Website for
information on the Writing Center
_____Needs a great deal of improvement: Grammar skills: see Help on the Website
for information on the Writing Center
_____Good diction (word choice) and sophisticated syntax (sentence structure:
skillful combination of clauses, use of complex sentences)
_____ Needs improvement: Diction (word choice) and syntax (sentence structure:
skillful combination of clauses)
_____Essay is well developed. Each body paragraph has as much information and
support (quotations) as possible.
_____Essay has some development. Body paragraphs need more examples and support
(quotations).
_____Needs improvement: You need to explain your ideas more fully and give more
examples, quotations, paraphrases.